5 Part Para EX Credit

Earlier in the year, I wrote on how I don't think through my ideas and also have bare-bones commentary, concerning my 5 part paragraphs. Since then, I have improved my skills greatly in the area of paragraph writing. When writing my paragraph this time through, I went over my ideas and carefully thought out every aspect of what I was going to say. I did type it up faster than I should have, but I am more comfortable with the quality of the content this time through. It also helped to have a greater understanding of the subject material in question, I had a pretty good grasp of what I was writing about. As I typed, my ideas took shape and I gained a deeper understanding of the poem than I could ever hope to gain just reading it. My proofreading didn't improve a whole lot this time through, but I feel like my errors were greatly reduced just my thinking about what I was going to say in the first place. Overall, I think my performance was greatly improved over the earlier paragraph.